You know the feeling. You’re seven chapters into a new book, and you just can’t put it down. The characters are so rich, the plot so compelling, you just have to find out what happens next. But how do authors create such irresistible books?

Tools to hook your reader. A keyboard, a beige journal stacked on a pink book and two pink notepads stacked on top of journal

Part of the answer lies in the first chapter. A great first chapter will suck you in, introduce you to the world of the book, and set the stage for the rest of the story. So how can you create a first chapter that will hook your reader?

Here are a few tips:

Start With Action

No one wants to read pages of description or exposition. Get the story moving from the very first sentence. Start with something exciting, something that will make the reader want to keep turning the pages. There are always exceptions to every definitive statement about how to start a book, but generally speaking, its best to avoid using a flashback or a protagonist waking up in your novel’s opening scene.

Create a Strong Protagonist

Your protagonist should be someone the reader can root for, someone with whom they can identify. Give your protagonist a problem or goal to pursue, and make sure they’re relatable and likable. Notice there isn’t a reference to perfection here. A hero or heroine who is flawed yet also does a good deed for another character will be quite appealing for your readers.

Introduce the Conflict

Your story needs conflict in order to be interesting. By introducing the conflict in the first chapter, you give the reader something to invest in. Will your protagonist be able to overcome the obstacles in their way? Here’s a quick tip about what conflict is not. Miscommunication is not a plot device. Any dilemma that could be resolved with a conversation between two characters is not conflict.

Set the Scene

Give the reader a taste of the world in which your story takes place. Where is it? What’s the time period? What’s the culture like? By setting the scene, you help the reader picture the world of your story and become more invested in it. If this book became a movie, how would the camera pan the scene? What’s noticeable? What isn’t?

Hook Your Reader with Your Writing

Your writing style is what will make your story unique. So use it to your advantage! Write in a way that’s engaging and interesting, and that will make the reader want to keep reading. Remember, there aren’t any new ideas. But no one has ever told this particular story the way that you can.

By following these tips, you can create a first chapter that’s sure to hook your reader and keep them coming back for more. Need additional tips? Download my free step-by-step roadmap for writing a riveting first chapter here.

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